Simone英语里写信时可不可以用BY THE WAY? 请帮我看一下这样回信是否来自可以.
的有关信息介绍如下：问题补充说明：Dear XXX, I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday. The result will be announced in 15 days, and it will be sent to you. However, I think the score will be higher if I have enough time to prepare, also, it is my first time to take the TOEFL test. Thank you for waiting for it. I am really grateful that you can give me the chance. : ) By the way, could you please tell me how soon I will be able to hear back from the school? I am really looking forward to being accepted by your school. Best regards, XXX 这样可以吗?会不会有哪里显得有点不礼貌呢?另外第一句的I've already taken the TOEFL yesterday要不要改成I took it呢?
Bytheway改成Ifit'sconvenient好些，毕竟从头到尾说的不是两件事360问答。
第一句改成Itook比较好，简洁。原句啰嗦。
